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Opportunity Drips

Opportunity drips From my fingertips Cup of dreams I sip Galaxy of hope I finally grip In the game if life My notch has been placed I can no put off The chances a higher power has graced Life wont stop Regardless of me Water will always drop Birds will always fly The hand will still tock on the clock Move now, Try to stretch this moment forever Failures will come and bump I'll attack like a lion catches prey Ill pounce and back down never Everyone in this Earth has a purpose to life Its not about a green bill Pulsate your heart with thrill Something makes me smile Take the extra mile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/24/2013 4:22:00 AM
You have a randomness with your rhyme that is refreshing. The alternating syllables per line as well. You make it all work though, expressing yourself in your way. I don't know if it's intentional, or just inspiration, but it works. Great job yet again.
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Lynn Dolly
Date: 2/26/2013 6:51:00 PM
Thank you sir :)
Date: 2/24/2013 4:06:00 AM
- Sharon, a poem that is a pleasure to read. :) - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Lynn Dolly
Date: 2/26/2013 6:52:00 PM
:) Thanks Anne-Lise

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