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Opiate of Delusion

Opiate of delusion…

Tempted by the flesh again,
Insanity, on mind descends,
Fools are made, where love transcends,
Opiate of delusion,
Give your heart, your very soul,
Estatic  mindset,  does take hold,
Another’s heart, yet you control,
Opiate of illusion…

Don Johnson

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Joe Maverick

January 14, 2012 at 2:02 PM

Well put, well done..) well Don...! old mate.. iv'e enjoyed your lines, in prose and rhyme the thoughts espoused, and reflections that shine, no doubt sprung from waves of air..) that conceal the wet as they hover "just there" in may days of torrid baked flare, i wish you well in all your fare, and just to say good to have met, in this bowl of soup on the internet..!

Don Johnson

January 14, 2012 at 3:39 PM

good on ya Joe old mate, your words n thoughts communicate, so well in this world of sadness... good on ya cobber...

Kim Merryman

January 14, 2012 at 10:45 AM

Very good, Don. This has a nice flow to it. Enjoyed this. Love,Kim

Lizzie Treetop

January 14, 2012 at 1:41 AM

Oh yes dear Don I do agree love unto itself is an opiate, one just has to be grown up enought to know when it is delusion or plain unquestionable truth!

John Rhinem

January 13, 2012 at 11:05 PM

Smile ˜ I wish I could share my deeper more complete thoughts about this verse but that would take much too long and probably become extremely intense so I shall just say, kudos, my Man ;-) ˜ John!:) ˜

Don Johnson

January 14, 2012 at 4:14 AM

Thanks John, words sometimes come, flow n run, sometimes...

January 13, 2012 at 11:07 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ Wink wink :)

Gwendolen Song

January 13, 2012 at 9:21 PM

Hi Don..Isn't it past your bedtime!? ha ,,I read a poem earlier this evening called Morphine and I thot your poem was along that line...yours is MUCH BETTER than the other one...Great rhythm in this one and yes, it's true, those opiates will get u to think about all SORTS of things! Gwendolen

Don Johnson

January 14, 2012 at 1:25 AM

no meds 4 me babe i don't even take aspro:)