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They tore up the landscape
And scarred it with craters,
They tore up the landscape
And turned it all black,
Like some kind of hell
Had raised up to hate us,
The trees are all gone
And the grass won’t grow back.

They chewed up the green belt
With heavy machinery,
They chewed up the green belt
And clawed it to shreds,
As though the four horsemen
Had ripped through the scenery,
Waged war on the earth
And then left it for dead.

What’s left to be proud of
From pillage and raping?
What’s left to be proud of
From greed that defiles?
A smouldering landfill
Sucked dry and misshapen,
And nothing but coal dust
For a good ten square miles...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Tony, this is truly sad and you find more and more of this going on everyday. Amazing write on the subject matter. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 5:48 PM
intensely beautifully, Tony...Jim
Mac Donald Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 8:01 PM
Hi Tony. An amazing piece..you have certainly captured the essence of this 'pillaged and raped landscape'. It fanned my curiousity so, that I looked the Welsh coal mines up on the web and found a collection of poetry: http://www.welshcoalmines.co.uk/Poems.htm However, your style and approach gives it more depth and definition. Beautifully done! Best to you...Mikki
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March 20, 2009 at 4:25 PM
beautiful imagery and emotion but so to the point...could read pages of this. sally g.
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