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Open Your Eyesss

I had this dreaam thaat peoplee Only caredd about money sex And weed People were dying in daylight Girls were being raped n bathrooms I haadd this other dreaam thaat I locked myself n the bathroom and Sliced my both my arms And theey bled horribly I hadd this one dream that i was so Alone in this world nobody cared That all i did was cry n covered the Pain with ah smilee I had dreams like martin luther king I just wanna know when am i gone Open my eyes ( Girl : hey its time to go ) Truth is i never closed my them :x

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Date: 4/28/2011 7:54:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun and share your many delights with us all with luv.
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Catoree. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:59:00 PM
Thaankss , and yes its sad to say that is reality read my other poem Pain is Love
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:55:00 PM
Catoree, what a dream... sad its also reality... thanks for sharing..p.d.
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