Open Your Eyes To the Truth

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my vision of this tainted world never learning becoming stupid as they never learned love and peace

Another war crime to add onto a bucket list 
that goes on far beyond our mind
 
Another human rights violation unheard of
when is this world going to awaken

The sleeping giant filled with grace 
and bring those murdering monsters to trial 

So as they may face justice 
their justice returned onto them
 
So many masks fall away in a world arena
Greed and pride invades countries 

Forcing poor innocence to suffer
trying to bring order with chaos and control

Desecration of the holy lands 
innocent blood spills on sands of our times 

Each and everyone of us knows morally right 
There is a worth in every death
 
The moons have bled 
I see it now opening behind scenes

Pray God be merciful unto the blind hiding 
open their eyes for a moment 

In a just democracy power is the people 
understand this ninety per cent of all killed 

Innocent people says it all sealed 
In the name of the cross and ark of our covenant 

They who love in God's name will speak 
Holy Spirit holds the castle fort commands you 

They who live on the dark side reek
peace for them does not exist
 
Killing machines show no mercy on suffering souls 
Thou shalt not kill love's reminder enemy hates

Love thy neighbor spoken on the tablets 
They have no morals standing within the light of truth 

Spawn's of the Devil out of hell kills with burning lead 
so we see behind the mask who deceives us

They who worship the golden calf again 
as they do the anti-Christ's bidding

Reeking havoc upon this earth plundering 
their soul aim is destruction givers 

Treating people like animals clowned joke 
reeks of vermin crawling underneath their skin 

Angels upon this earth our battles has begun 
we all can see the ignorance killing is not just

With twisted visions planning forward with no democracy 
to kneel playing the key role fate our destiny awaits us all

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2015 12:40:00 PM

- Truth one has seen with his own eyes and formulated by your own thought, Liam - The only true law is that which leads to freedom, a excellent poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/1/2015 7:56:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! Just got to your piece this Sunday afternoon. From our phone conversation on Saturday, I do see what you mean regarding your write here and the recent one I did on "A Progressive Shadow." Your magnificent couplet here is the perfect metaphorical and image complement to "A Progressive Shadow." Methinks Mate you hit the target solid on, with this most timely, spot-on poem. Outstanding Work as always!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/1/2015 7:50:00 AM

Hi Liam: A sad commentary on the horrors confronting all the innocents. As someone who has been to many middle east countries(years ago) nothing has changed. It's not religion but power including a dictator who was a dentist. Great Write!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/31/2015 11:15:00 AM

Hi Liam! Wow!A most powerful,outstanding poem,you've written here my dearest friend,Liam.Very sad but very beautifully written with a lot of truth and deep caring, understanding and compassion.Yes, it's so very sad and horrible whats taking place all over our world these days, and for so long.So many very sad and horrible situations, n' terrible injustices against mankind, just very deplorable,tragic things, and it really saddens my heart and soul so very much.I know that you have a very beautiful heart n soul Liam, a heart of pure gold and that you deeply care.So sweet of you!God bless you more for it.Thank you so much for caring, n' writing this very beautiful and excellent piece here,Liam.A true glowing golden gem!Superb!Great poem!Just awesome!I love it.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^