Carmen Castro Poet Rhyme

Open Your Eyes

The anger in the world is so overwhelming  
My eye's are so open and there is no use pretending 
That we're forced fed the bad, and now evil's prevailing 
It makes me assume that this world is soon ending 
Please open your eyes, heart, and your ears. 
The media is trying to over flood us with fear 
Fears like a poison that now runs through your veins 
When we live in fear nothings attained  
Rip fear out your minds and so much is gained 
Then they'll fear us when this world is retained  


By Carmen Castro  
 Copyright@2012

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Stephan McBride July 1, 2012 at 6:50 AM indeed many have a veil over their eyes,that must be lifted to give vision, May the Lord,bless,comfort,and direct your path day by day Carmen Castro July 1, 2012 at 4:45 PM Yes they do Stephan... Not everything you see on TV is the truth we have to use better judgement : )

Richard Palmer June 7, 2012 at 6:39 PM So true,I love this,great write Carmen Castro June 7, 2012 at 6:43 PM Thanks Richard, Glad you enjoyed it

Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2012 at 10:57 AM Carmen this is a "wake up" poem.....Yes, open your eyes...very well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise Carmen Castro June 6, 2012 at 11:02 AM Thank you Anne Lise

Justcallme Britt June 6, 2012 at 9:54 AM Beautiful conclusion in the last two lines. What a motivational message <3 Carmen Castro June 6, 2012 at 10:18 AM Thanks Brittany