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"open Wounds"

Awaken by lights flashing and sirens loud He looked out the window and all he saw was a crowd He runs down the stairs hoping not to fall Suffering from a headache…you know the type from alcohol He opens his front door and runs across the street He saw a body laying under a sheet He asked his neighbors what is going on They told him his friend was shot in the head and he is gone He said to himself this cant be He was just with his friend before he had gone to sleep He cries on his way back across the street Thinking about how life without his friend is going to be As looks for the dog tags they got when they were ten He noticed something strange on his hands and skin Then images flashing over and over again Of the last night he spent with his friend Vowing to never drink alcohol again Written by: Leeroy Rasean Bowman-Palmer November 7,2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/4/2016 12:42:00 AM
Leeroy Bowman-Palmer, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry---LINDA
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:58:00 AM
LEEROY, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:33:00 PM
excellent write! scary too.
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Date: 11/7/2010 4:04:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its very creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. why not check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:11:00 AM
Powerful write my friend... much to think about
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