OPEN VERSE NO 27

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THIS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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WRINKLES
in
vivid
  transformation
& corroborated
  shifts of tone
 reminiscent
stimulus
  plays of light
powerfully alive
 in split
second feelings
 interspersed
by
suggestions
in
 entrenched
 dynamic events
yet
 unhurried style
with
lightness of
 pushing
momentary
situations
encountered

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