OPEN VERSE NO 21

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THIS AN OPEN(organic) VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment .

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TRY FAIL BETTER
doubtless
  fragile
in
quiet originality
of
sublimated energy
so redolent
  eternal
anguish
elegant
  surreal
agonising
  challenges
of abstract
    concepts
conviction
ineffable
  interest
remorseless
the
  impossible
complicated
self-absorbing

exploring
the
  unshakeable
bonds
of
  fascination
enlivened
by
sightings
  so much
larger
  than life
prodigious
in
  appearance
disarmingly
  palpable
in
ironic
  intimacy

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