Open Ur Eyes

Does she see blinded by the lights, what will still shine.
Open your eyes, hold my heart, you'll never be mine.
Clay. Created, dreams wash the dirt away.
Truth gleams.her heart breaks, she was in a daze.
Laughing, hurting, sneaking she feels they're all the same.
Mixed emotions, life unfolding, must she change her ways.
A book well written,if it was no fake, if there was no girl, no fate.
If she hadn't fell for falling far, there would have been no mistake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Scott Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 12:07 PM
HAD TO READ AGAIN SUCH A NICE POEM MATE LIKE ALL YOUR OTHER WRITES THANKYOU FOR COMMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT
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September 23, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Thanks for sharing a well written poem, Jessica, well done & look forwars to reading more of the same. BLess you, Gordon
Scott Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 10:50 AM
WICKED POEM JESSICA I DONT THINK THINGS ALWAYS WORK OUT THE WAY YOU WANT THEM TO SIMILER TO MY SUMBLE AND ONE OF A KIND XX DAVIDSCOTT
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September 17, 2012 at 2:05 PM
JESSICA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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August 3, 2012 at 10:34 AM
good poem... congrats Jessica :)
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Well written poem Jessica, thank you for sharing it. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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