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AN OPEN FORM uses spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,& relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input &respond in a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood thus is inherently variable.

ABSTRACT
bewitched
  astonishment
beyond
belief 
  unassailable
    impenetrable
intense

  visionary
elaborate
iconography
  explicated

   icily
    smooth

SETTINGS

   spiralling
           in situ
eliciting
   sensation
dazzling
overarching
    narrative
of
aesthetic
   ornamentation
        
     suspended

in
reflective
                auras
of
tender
    gaze

FEELINGS

emotional
     intensity
emphasised
attributes
 in
    passionate
response
of
explicit
   immediacy

enduring
sans
  explanation

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2025 8:48:00 AM

What a creative write and picture you have here. I really enjoyed reading. Have a blessed day writing away..........