Holly Bohto Poet Rhyme

Open the Cage On Angers Rage

Sitting
          inside
                   calming
                                emotions.
A 
 bath
        preparing 
                        relaxing
                                     devotions.
Lavender 
               salts 
                      sprinkled 
                                     and
                                          bubbling.
Rippling
             waves
                       pardon
                                   the
                                       grumbling.
A 
 steamy
             rise
                  around
                             raging
                                       places.
Pieces
           floating
                        in
                          full
                               dissipation. 
That
       fly
          away
                  on
                     breezy
                               torn
                                     hazes.
Released
               from
                      prolapsed
                                       angers
                                                  cages.
Leaving
            the
                way
                     for
                         cleansing
                                         by
                                           sages.

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Space Cadet January 11, 2017 at 7:07 PM Perfect. Thank you so much for sharing. -- Wesley C. Holly Bohto January 11, 2017 at 10:11 PM Thanks for the visit. Wesley C.

Darren White January 11, 2017 at 1:41 AM That is absolutely stunning Holly. Flow without taking away from the meaning indeed. And the visual is spectacular. Holly Bohto January 11, 2017 at 9:57 AM Thank you Darren. You are so kind. You are the gifted one......:)

Chris Green January 10, 2017 at 9:12 AM You have expressed this nicely because that is pretty much how it flows. Really cool Holly. Holly Bohto January 10, 2017 at 5:51 PM Thanks Chris. Flow and not taking away from the meaning. ..Challenging. :) at times.