Open Space

Even silence breathes ridicule

As the world keeps running

The wheels turn over convictions

With open bags no cats within

Yet beans spilled all over and under

Each one a magician,
 
with easy prestige

I see you as you see me

Hand to hand gave birth to these predictions

Jealous at sanity, 

wander in simplicity

The rites we write, 

left astray to what is right

And destiny left ajar, 

just take a peak

Be proud with comfort you know it all

Influence rides over the belief of command

Free to be entered, 

yes your choice!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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