Open Sesame

when you have no hidden agenda ~ everyone else's becomes more clear By David Kavanagh

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/27/2021 3:18:00 PM

So true David, when the mist clears everything becomes more visible. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2021 3:39:00 PM

Strange thing Tom, that mist will never clear if it's looked at with a misty mind, but if approached with an open mind, it really can be negotiated around, and burnt off, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/27/2021 11:14:00 AM

Food for thought here...kind of like having a clean conscience allows us to see many things more clearly. Interesting writes from you, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/27/2021 1:03:00 PM

Heya Jenna, I'm far from being an angel and this is in no way intended to to make me seem like any paragon of good, I really have no interest in pushing or pursuing hidden agendas, I believe this stance actually makes me more aware of them, sometimes get myself in trouble back home here for stating what I see as obvious manipulation by certain parties, yet others cannot til it's pointed out to them, and even then don't want to see it, I'm sure I'm not alone, cheers David