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something shifts in space
palms and soles of feet glisten
hermit alone knows

silent thunder peaks 
bliss mist percolates within
hidden in plain sight

form splits into two 
one becomes two and two one
duality ends

18-April-2021
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Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:08 AM
lovely ~ "silent thunder peaks " love this line best for some reason ~
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April 18, 2021 at 9:30 AM
fact stranger than fiction ...
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