Open secret

revealed yet concealed 
power that makes breath flow
love’s elixir with which we are healed 
as our auric field thus continues to grow 

the beauteously slow blossoming of a rose
caterpillar transformed as a butterfly
rainbow in the sky striking a pose
the opening of our third eye

immediate and intimate
flame in the cave of our heart 
bliss magnetism that does not abate
ours for the asking on adding love to cart

we may like to share but no one can pair
when we say our ego dropped away
or light of our Self self-aware
seen in this form of clay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/4/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Unseeking Seeker. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your poem highlights the "open secret" that mankind is not operating at its full potential. I love the line, "ours for the asking on adding love to the cart."
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/4/2024 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, these flash contests are fun!
Date: 12/1/2024 12:51:00 PM
This is a great inspirational poem! :)
Login to Reply
Seeker Avatar
Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/1/2024 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sam :)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter