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Healing wounds of betrayal open once more with blood seeping out of it. Happenstance brings her face to face with her former flame. But this time, walking hand-in-hand with the woman he left her... at the altar for. (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by your truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 03/27/2021

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Date: 3/27/2021 12:26:00 PM
I tried to use the form you provided, and I was delighted to pen a lovely poem, too; I will be submitting it in a while; thanks for giving this excellent form and the fantastic poem. Warm wishes, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaab:-) I can't wait to check out your amazing work!
Date: 3/27/2021 10:55:00 AM
Nice form, Edward. I'll be giving it a try. It lent itself nicely to your story.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2021 11:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, L.Milton:-) I'm stoked to see you try the Yalto form, my friend. I'm sure you'll ace it!
Date: 3/27/2021 8:35:00 AM
You always excel in this form you created, Edward. You evoke just the right emotions in a few words.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/27/2021 4:39:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

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