'open Minds"

Lighting bolts spread wide
glow my fields of hope today
clear ways for dreaming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:15 PM
Great imagery, Michael. And thanks so much for your comments today. LUv, Andrea
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July 17, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Enjoy watching lightening spread light on scenery at night. This is a somewhat magical inspiration for your dreams. Beautiful haiku, Michael. Love, Carolyn
Stella Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Most excelant write on this haiku loved the imagery tho sad and happy I guess with making new paths for brighter futures at the dinner table enjoyed this one also thanks for your kins comments on my poem I don't care keep up the great writing
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Dreamy thoughts that you have penned in this Haiku...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Keep the gifted pen flowing wonderful lines for us to read at poetry soup...Sara
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