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'open Minds"

Lighting bolts spread wide glow my fields of hope today clear ways for dreaming

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2010 11:15:00 PM

Great imagery, Michael. And thanks so much for your comments today. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2010 6:49:00 AM

Enjoy watching lightening spread light on scenery at night. This is a somewhat magical inspiration for your dreams. Beautiful haiku, Michael. Love, Carolyn

Katherine Stella

Date: 7/17/2010 6:29:00 AM

Most excelant write on this haiku loved the imagery tho sad and happy I guess with making new paths for brighter futures at the dinner table enjoyed this one also thanks for your kins comments on my poem I don't care keep up the great writing

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2010 4:01:00 AM

Dreamy thoughts that you have penned in this Haiku...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Keep the gifted pen flowing wonderful lines for us to read at poetry soup...Sara