Open Love

You can hold them close
But keep your arms wide open
Kids need room to grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Badmus Avatar
July 26, 2008 at 9:35 AM
true!i like the simplicity and the blunt nature of the message.it's beautiful
Buys Avatar
July 24, 2008 at 4:27 PM
So very true and sometimes so difficult to do. Congratulations on having this one featured this week. Regards Heidie
Richards Avatar
July 23, 2008 at 3:44 PM
I love this poem, and can really relate to the task of "letting go". It's a hard thing to do, but necessary. Congratulations on being featured this week. Well deserved! Carrie
Sheart Avatar
July 23, 2008 at 11:04 AM
Hi Vernette Isn't that the truth! Food for thought. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Vernette. Love, Carol
Degenhardt Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 5:45 AM
The form is executed perfectly while the sentiment of the piece speaks volumes to the reader. Wonderfully stated and penned. Congratulations on the feature. Michael
Mckenzie Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on a heartfelt write so true to my heart! Great write! Laura :)
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July 21, 2008 at 1:40 PM
So much truth shared in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 10:50 AM
Vernette - No truer words have ever been spoken - I struggle with this one myself -Congrats on being featured
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July 21, 2008 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations Vernette. Nice to see you featured again with your sennyu "Open Love." Vince
Winter Avatar
July 20, 2008 at 5:45 PM
Miss you Vernette! Congratulations where ever you are on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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