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Open Invitation

You treat me like a whore But no more I'm actually quite a bore What do you want me for You look into my eyes You ignore all my cries You give me all these lies And you wear a disguise Not today Just look away I don't want to play I'm not a buffet You drive me mad You treat me like a fad You don't care if I'm sad I'm sure there's more I could add I'm not a sensation This isn't a negotiation Find a new temptation I'm not an open invitation *Written on April 29, 2012*

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Date: 4/30/2012 12:27:00 PM
Great poem here Lily!!
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:15:00 PM
Touching written poem Lily, but I like it!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:31:00 AM
Smile ˜ Love The Rhyme ˜ Definitely Understand The Emotions, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Lady * Personally, If I Were Seventeen Or Eighteen Or Twent-Three Even Again, Then, I Might Fit This Blind Box ˜ Thankfully I Given A Bit Of Time To Take Hold, The Beauty & Preciousness Of Anothers Heart * My Love to You, John!:) ˜
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