Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"open Doors"

Today I sat and had a stare...
Closed my eyes to drift in care...
Till I opened a small door on my heart...
And pulled out a memory that's not far apart...
It played out like a movie with no credits ran...
The air you could smell and the breeze as you stand...
Your fingers in mine as a lock would be secure...
To many ups and downs put us here, left with no cure...
So I tuck this memory away till you run through my mind again..
A library of days , missed words and what might have been...

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Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2010 at 10:30 PM Wonderful rhyme Michael, U played this one very well. A sweet little part when you took us into the drift of your heart. Somethings in life are hard to recover. When it comes to my x-I have no thoughts to store. I'm sad to think why someone here is being resentful. Michael! But, hopefully them memories will COME back around. And give U the joy you 2 once had. Forgivness will open the doors.lol, it never did opened mine back to love. but it is obvious your still in love. Enjoyed your poem...p.d.

Lalima Sharma September 11, 2010 at 8:04 PM Beautiful!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 11, 2010 at 11:12 AM Retrospective view in your lines... my White Knight ... this weekend write... a library of days, missed words and what might have been.. don't we all have those memories luv.. u have penned it so creatively luv.. thankxx for the props on my 911 poem..when I saw Nikko's contest... and saw the date.. the words immediately sprung into my head and heart..luv..

Hyle Chu September 11, 2010 at 10:53 AM "It played out like a movie with no credits ran" witty. I'm having an early drink. Cheers to what might have been.

Wilma Neels September 11, 2010 at 9:45 AM Open write with so much emotion.. I love how you convert what you experience into stunning pieces Michael, luv Wilma