Open

es 2/21/2011

                                            Open?

                                    Empty Store front

                                 Open Sign on the door

                        Doors locked, Stillness  in front of me

                                       Stores closed
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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 11:50 PM
A paradoxical store!
Mehta Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Beautiful expression on the word open, eddee
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