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Opeing Doors

words are inspirational 
ryhmes can be sensational 
but darkness in the words can prove fatal 
corrupting that baby in the cradle
you do the best u are able to do
so you gotta make this flow sicker than the flu 
my words are daggers and their flying at you 
shockingly cold because their true 
the words are thick and stick to my tounge like glue 
so what do you do
when everyones counting on you but your chokin
and you feel like your broken...
but then the door opened
THERE IS NO MORE COPING 
no more time for choking
the floodgates fall, and you burst into rage screaming it all
so long have you felt so small
so long youve been been learning to craul
the time has come to stand tall
and you cant stop you cant stall
if me expressing me makes me belivable 
thers nothing thats not acheivable 
im stuck in my ways, head strong and undecivable 
i incorperate the power of will dont tell me somthing unreachable
they told me that adhd had me unteachable 
the goals that ive met? ive been told their unmeatable
but here i am and here i stand , UNBELIVABLE
the door opened 
all i had to do was walk through it
all i had to do was put my mind to it
commit to the future and do it
and they mock me a failure, well screw it 
ive got more heart then them and they knew it
i gave them a spot in it but they blew it
tears represent a tragidy 
but a smile follows eventually 
and everyone seeks happines subcontiously 
and the strong can break through the mockery
and the witty can remain calm during hipocracy 
and the strong of moral become part of our democracy 
just remeber to aproach that door cautiously

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/21/2011 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, dustin
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dustin. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dustin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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