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Opeing Doors

words are inspirational ryhmes can be sensational but darkness in the words can prove fatal corrupting that baby in the cradle you do the best u are able to do so you gotta make this flow sicker than the flu my words are daggers and their flying at you shockingly cold because their true the words are thick and stick to my tounge like glue so what do you do when everyones counting on you but your chokin and you feel like your broken... but then the door opened THERE IS NO MORE COPING no more time for choking the floodgates fall, and you burst into rage screaming it all so long have you felt so small so long youve been been learning to craul the time has come to stand tall and you cant stop you cant stall if me expressing me makes me belivable thers nothing thats not acheivable im stuck in my ways, head strong and undecivable i incorperate the power of will dont tell me somthing unreachable they told me that adhd had me unteachable the goals that ive met? ive been told their unmeatable but here i am and here i stand , UNBELIVABLE the door opened all i had to do was walk through it all i had to do was put my mind to it commit to the future and do it and they mock me a failure, well screw it ive got more heart then them and they knew it i gave them a spot in it but they blew it tears represent a tragidy but a smile follows eventually and everyone seeks happines subcontiously and the strong can break through the mockery and the witty can remain calm during hipocracy and the strong of moral become part of our democracy just remeber to aproach that door cautiously

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Date: 10/21/2011 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, dustin
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Date: 10/13/2011 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dustin. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dustin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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