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Opaque Grey

beneath the hazy bough i lay amongst the prey of opaque grey impenetrable souls seize like tides and nebulous love fears what time hides blurred without a third eye to reason with my heart my enigmatic mind delights in what craves to depart beneath the hazy bough I pray obscurity and disarray become debris to throw away- amongst the prey of opaque grey 11.26.19 Opaque Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/29/2019 4:10:00 PM
Hi Lu: Beautiful choice words. I loved it!
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Date: 11/26/2019 10:31:00 PM
Awesome, LuLoo. Love it.
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Date: 11/26/2019 4:34:00 PM
simply beautiful my sweet friend...perfect rhythm and rhyme... best wishes in the contest... hugs :)
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Date: 11/26/2019 1:28:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 11/26/2019 1:24:00 PM
Absolutely amazing. Such a creative and free flowing piece of art you have crafted my friend. This just feels good to read, though the theme is a bit grey and definitely opaque, this one filters through perfectly. Best wishes in the contest
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