Beautiful Scars Poet Couplet

Opaque Grey

beneath the hazy bough i lay
amongst the prey of opaque grey

impenetrable souls seize like tides
and nebulous love fears what time hides

blurred without a third eye to reason with my heart
my enigmatic mind delights in what craves to depart

beneath the hazy bough I pray
obscurity and disarray
become debris to throw away-
amongst the prey of opaque grey



11.26.19
Opaque Poetry Contest

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Ralph Sergi November 29, 2019 at 4:10 PM Hi Lu: Beautiful choice words. I loved it!

Line Gauthier November 26, 2019 at 10:31 PM Awesome, LuLoo. Love it.

Sandra Adams November 26, 2019 at 4:34 PM simply beautiful my sweet friend...perfect rhythm and rhyme... best wishes in the contest... hugs :)

DM Babbit November 26, 2019 at 1:28 PM Beautiful.

Chris Green November 26, 2019 at 1:24 PM Absolutely amazing. Such a creative and free flowing piece of art you have crafted my friend. This just feels good to read, though the theme is a bit grey and definitely opaque, this one filters through perfectly. Best wishes in the contest