Opaque

opaque wonder
lighting and thunder
all because of you

questions of the heart
that always seem to start
whenever I’m with you

kindred spirits roam
distance, far from home
thinking about you

hide it all away
starting a new day
moving south of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Like the metaphoric use here. I especially like the first stanza. Keep writing. Sara
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