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time is a thick fog near field perceived, but far off ~ impenetrable

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Date: 12/15/2022 7:24:00 PM
I had to read this a couple of times; I am not in a serious mood and this is metaphorically serious!
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Date: 12/10/2022 8:46:00 AM
Ah, a nice one, Jeff.
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Date: 12/10/2022 6:32:00 AM
yep;.....I always loved the fog and its mysterious manner of reshaping and reforming the commonplace.....Nicely done Jeff
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Date: 12/10/2022 6:18:00 AM
It does look that way. I've never liked fog.
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