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time is a thick fog near field perceived, but far off ~ impenetrable
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:24 PM
I had to read this a couple of times; I am not in a serious mood and this is metaphorically serious!
Hankins Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Ah, a nice one, Jeff.
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 6:32 AM
yep;.....I always loved the fog and its mysterious manner of reshaping and reforming the commonplace.....Nicely done Jeff
Logan Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 6:18 AM
It does look that way. I've never liked fog.
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