Opaque-
pure as water flows
through my eyes light not passes
cloudy blurred opaque
smeared muddied grimy
this darken path so leads me
tween a rock and a hard
space hazy extremes
through my eyes light not passes
cloudy blurred opaque
11/25/19
Opaque Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausin
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