This poem uses the new Word Prism form - see https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/a_draft_new_form_-_the_word_prism-43896
slowly sinking pressure losing patience lilts to linger longer 'oo' lolls in the mouth like a boiled lolly 'ze' slinks away, snakily dark muck, surface glossy, dares you to enter gravity blinking a warming I wait longer than planned watch control become sticky I learn to play with it
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