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Don’t know why I’m still here. The scratching on the wall read: “THE WORLD ENDED YESTERDAY” John G. Lawless ©4/7/2023

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/26/2023 6:43:00 AM

Ah the deceptive lure of graffiti. A most amusing senryu with a perfect title. Cheers as you carry on. Brian

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/11/2023 12:42:00 PM

Hi John… Really creative piece. Gee the only woman here? Me! Pangie. Can relate

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2023 7:43:00 PM

Yeah! How is it possible?! After all, you read it. It must be true! lol.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 4/7/2023 11:00:00 PM

Cartoon in the New Yorker, flood waters slowly rising: One farmer says to another, "If I knew it would take so long, I wouldn't have said 'Goodbye' so soon!" Elizabeth

Paul Willason

Date: 4/7/2023 3:14:00 PM

Why wasn't I told....missed the big game again. Amusing take John, left a smile.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 4/7/2023 10:44:00 AM

You seem to be having a bit of difficulty with "graffiti", John...very amusingly so.