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Oo Oo Oo Sun

oo oo oo sun,
stop your burn,

give us some fun,
we have light non,

please fast run,
stop your fun.

kidsi do not know?

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Beata Agustin

December 6, 2024 at 8:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2016 at 11:15 PM

Nice little poem, Hamza... LINDA

Skat A

January 14, 2016 at 10:55 PM

HAMZA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 10, 2013 at 6:15 AM

Welcome to Poetrysoup Hamza. May you enjoy the site for years to come. Everyone here will help you along the way if they can or they will find someone who is capable. Love, Carol