Ontogenesis

Now I must ponder your meaning
The coming of a smile is like a ship
Sometimes it is swallowed by the horizon
But you have this thought on your lip
And my heart was a sail before
Carrying me where I did not want to go
But you keep coming and coming
And I can no longer pant softly nor slow
It is the sweet beginning beginning sweet
But why me, all my castles fell like sand
My dream is just a crumpled sheet
And evening curled up like a flower in my hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Goff Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 6:31 PM
9 yrs L'nass....where have you gone my friend? I miss you...
Horn Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Reminds me of song Sail Away Silvery Moon. Moving with much emotion. Even noticed Funom liked it. Jim Horn
Makama Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 3:49 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
A   Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 5:17 AM
L Nass --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Carty Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 4:22 AM
L'Nass, it has been some years since I have been here. You are so blessed with making words come alive. I love this poem. "my heart was a sail before Carrying me where I did not want to go" is very meaningful for me right now. This just shows the helplessness of man's destiny.
A   Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 4:50 PM
L Nass :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda
Gigno Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:36 PM
!!!
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February 6, 2013 at 3:47 AM
How happy i am to have found your poetry again.I feel blessed with this beauty.
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