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Onslaught

drip, drop, trickling rising, overflowing now... emotional dam wreaks havoc, torn, tossed destroying walls, drowning wells... no signs of stopping gushing, roaring, lost freedom to flow everywhere... seeps to silent sea

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De R

Date: 2/29/2012 11:13:00 AM

Powerfully written! Great haikus! It's so nice that I had to time to read your poetry today. It felt great. Hugs! :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/1/2011 7:36:00 AM

Incredible series of haiku. Your talent blossoms sweet friend. Going to soup mail you soon. Love & hugs, shar xoxo

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/19/2011 8:52:00 AM

Hahaha, Nikko, Kumusta ka na ito linggo? Umaasa pa rin kayo ng malusog na! Just saw that I missed out your Haikus! Greatly penned, enjoyed the read! Ingat!...Gert. And thank you for your always uplifting comments!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/31/2010 2:12:00 PM

Nikki, these haikus tell the emotions with such power, as if each verse is a turbo engine. One love, my friend.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2010 6:30:00 PM

Hi Nikko,,..,, enjoyed my time here on the soup,, Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2010 7:59:00 AM

Nice Nikko, good luck in the contest,.. have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2010 4:06:00 PM

Nikko, I think this is first time I am seeing this? Gosh, that last one is very powerful and the last line of it alone was worthy of a win! Luv, Andrea

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2010 1:58:00 PM

all the best Nikko, with this in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 5:14:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Nikko. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Kash Poet

Date: 12/15/2010 4:54:00 AM

An interesting entry for the contest!You have drawn beautiful images of our emotional flow.Goodluck-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2010 1:59:00 PM

Great images you have penned water as a means of emotions flowing free, nikko. Good luck in the contest,

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/14/2010 12:25:00 PM

Nikko what a brilliant entry for the contest.. Absolutely love the flow.. Wishing you all the best with this winner.. ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2010 12:01:00 PM

How creative to compare the rain and water to emotions overflowing from an "emotional dam. I especially love the last line -- that's where our emotions go, silently to a sea of feelings. Excellent entry for the ontest, Nikko, and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 11:57:00 AM

A nice view of the flowing water theme for Rick's contest.. good luck my sweet friend... enjoyed the motion and emotion of every Haiku .. deeply expressive ..good luck with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/14/2010 10:20:00 AM

jumping right into the action, nikko... i go whooot with these crisp 'kus! lots of winning streaks in the contest.. thanks for your happy comments... puto bumbong na tayo!! ::)... hugggs, nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 9:56:00 AM

Great one..Reads like a winner to me..The sea can calm those wrecked emotions..I was delighted that you stopped by to comment on my work..Soup mail in a few...Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/14/2010 9:37:00 AM

Nice one Nikko, images flow like the water in this one...best of luck to you my friend...soup mail to u