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Only Together

You were my raindrop and I was your cloud…
                               We spoke in whispers that were heard out aloud…
                                   I was your teardrop and you were my eyes…
                                       You saw in colors my dreams pass by…
                                     You were my hands and I was your grasp…
                             We felt our way through the dark and over the past… 
                                     You were the letters and I was the word…
                            We rhymed our way across the sky like wings of a bird…
                                 Together we sleep under rain that has passed…
                                      Holding each other in a love that will last…

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Elizabeth Jubenville

Date: 2/3/2013 4:24:00 PM

There is so much love behind the words, romantic, and so sweet...

... Gigno

Date: 1/31/2013 8:52:00 AM

!!!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/26/2013 8:56:00 PM

Wow. I like this one. good write - JH

Heather Ober

Date: 1/26/2013 7:33:00 AM

Oh, wow. SO sweet! I'm so glad to see you're back and writing :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/25/2013 10:02:00 PM

Michael; This is good. I tried singing it out and guess what - it sounded good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/24/2013 4:33:00 AM

Michael, I really touched by this piece, and straight to my fave list :D you fly my imaginations through a beautiful romantism, great penned Michael :) - hug, yanny

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2013 12:56:00 PM

Ahhh!!Sooo!! Romantic..That is the way that true love should be..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2013 12:58:00 PM

I am going to add this one to my favs..I may print it out and do one as a response..Sara

David Williams

Date: 1/22/2013 7:39:00 AM

Michael romance just oozes from this, it is dripping down my screen , well done buddy...David

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/22/2013 5:50:00 AM

Now this defines the word ROMANTIC!!! An excellent write, Michael my friend... kudos!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/21/2013 9:21:00 PM

feel so nice and comfort with you lovely romantic write dear poet Michael...enjoyed so much the imagery...:) luv Sk

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 3:22:00 PM

Always the romantic i so enjoyed your metaphor! Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/21/2013 2:25:00 PM

just beautiful!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2013 1:33:00 PM

This is an incredible and wondrous write my friend! I sincerely loved reading this amazing and fantastic poem this afternoon! You have been writing some awesome poems lately, some really spectacular pieces, Michael! I will have an entry into your contest soon my friend, it just takes time sometimes coming up with the better writes! Excellent Work!!