Michael J. Falotico Poet Lyric

Only Together

You were my raindrop and I was your cloud…
                               We spoke in whispers that were heard out aloud…
                                   I was your teardrop and you were my eyes…
                                       You saw in colors my dreams pass by…
                                     You were my hands and I was your grasp…
                             We felt our way through the dark and over the past… 
                                     You were the letters and I was the word…
                            We rhymed our way across the sky like wings of a bird…
                                 Together we sleep under rain that has passed…
                                      Holding each other in a love that will last…

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Elizabeth Jubenville February 3, 2013 at 4:24 PM There is so much love behind the words, romantic, and so sweet...

... Gigno January 31, 2013 at 8:52 AM !!!

Honestly J.T. January 26, 2013 at 8:56 PM Wow. I like this one. good write - JH

Heather Ober January 26, 2013 at 7:33 AM Oh, wow. SO sweet! I'm so glad to see you're back and writing :)

Lucilla Carrillo January 25, 2013 at 10:02 PM Michael; This is good. I tried singing it out and guess what - it sounded good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Yanny Widjanarko January 24, 2013 at 4:33 AM Michael, I really touched by this piece, and straight to my fave list :D you fly my imaginations through a beautiful romantism, great penned Michael :) - hug, yanny

Sara Kendrick January 22, 2013 at 12:56 PM Ahhh!!Sooo!! Romantic..That is the way that true love should be..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara Sara Kendrick January 22, 2013 at 12:58 PM I am going to add this one to my favs..I may print it out and do one as a response..Sara

David Williams January 22, 2013 at 7:39 AM Michael romance just oozes from this, it is dripping down my screen , well done buddy...David

Jack Ellison January 22, 2013 at 5:50 AM Now this defines the word ROMANTIC!!! An excellent write, Michael my friend... kudos!

Sukmawati Komala January 21, 2013 at 9:21 PM feel so nice and comfort with you lovely romantic write dear poet Michael...enjoyed so much the imagery...:) luv Sk

Debbie Guzzi January 21, 2013 at 3:22 PM Always the romantic i so enjoyed your metaphor! Light & Love

Ilene Bauer January 21, 2013 at 2:25 PM just beautiful!

Russell Sivey January 21, 2013 at 1:33 PM This is an incredible and wondrous write my friend! I sincerely loved reading this amazing and fantastic poem this afternoon! You have been writing some awesome poems lately, some really spectacular pieces, Michael! I will have an entry into your contest soon my friend, it just takes time sometimes coming up with the better writes! Excellent Work!!

Ingrid Showalter Swift January 21, 2013 at 1:28 PM lovely poem sweet write