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Only Time Will Tell

Loving you was a love of forbidden boundaries... A haze by which I could not leave Your spirit spoke to me And I could not look away No thought could suit me more than running away with you No money, job or obstacles could keep me from you To hold your hand To lay with your soul Would be ecstasy unto me Radiant as a thousand suns Do you feel my love? It's strength? It's purity? Or is my commitment not as strong as the bonds of sex? Does love conquer all Or is it all a dream? Only time will tell...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 7:43:00 PM
JULES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2014 8:29:00 AM
Hi Jules, this is such a deep, insightful write. Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:26:00 AM
Jules,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:38:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jules - I choose your first very well written poem - Yes, only time will tell !- Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:48:00 PM
So many thoughts to ponder, dreams to explore, only time will tell.... a wonderful first poem here at poetry soup Jules, hope there is many more to come, a big happy welcome to you :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 8/20/2014 2:01:00 PM
Looking forward to it! Variety is the spice of life :)
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Jules Gustof
Date: 8/19/2014 5:27:00 PM
Thank you..there will be more..of many varieties :)

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