Only Snow's Breath

The time for your warmth,
Left to feel bitter coldness,
Decieving beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 8:36 PM
Tabitha - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ
Fawcett Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Love, Nigel
Heck Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 11:25 PM
Dear Tabitha - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Winter Solstice contest! Well done! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 6:02 PM
Well done, Tabitha, and so well deserved to be among the winners!! Happy Holidays...Carrie
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November 1, 2008 at 8:10 AM
Interesting winter reflection. I like the last line. You may want to change wormth to warmth in the first line. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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