Only Snow's Breath

The time for your warmth, Left to feel bitter coldness, Decieving beauty

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Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2008 8:36:00 PM

Tabitha - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/23/2008 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Love, Nigel

John Heck

Date: 12/22/2008 11:25:00 PM

Dear Tabitha - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

sharon Winter

Date: 12/22/2008 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Winter Solstice contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2008 6:02:00 PM

Well done, Tabitha, and so well deserved to be among the winners!! Happy Holidays...Carrie

Date: 11/1/2008 8:10:00 AM

Interesting winter reflection. I like the last line. You may want to change wormth to warmth in the first line. Best wishes with your writing. Karen