Onion Syndrome

Tortoise layers grow

Spider sideways and implode

Needling the way home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 11:36 PM
Jaja que buen poema! Gracias por conpartir- eduardo
Higgins Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:06 AM
You are so mind blowing with your writes my friend..everything I have read from you doesn't disappoint...awesome work.
Hensley Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:40 PM
Nice poem! i just messaged you check it out my friend!
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