Debjani Mitra Poet Senryu

One-Sided Love

Her kiss reached his lips?
Single tick turned double blue.
One sided love wilts  





4th February 2019
Valentine Senryu Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 
Syllable count on PS = 5 7 5

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 4, 2019 at 1:35 PM Hello Mitra Debjani, so nice to meet you. One sided love is very hurtful. So keep on looking until you find the right person for you. have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2019 at 1:34 PM - Lovely written, Debjani :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)