Oneness

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soft, gentle outpouring, duly distilled by our loving heart, infuses in each pulse, an aspect of vibrancy, innate to expansion of soul, being nothing but one with the whole 09-May-2021

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/8/2021 7:43:00 PM

Dear Seeker, I'm drawn to the concept of Oneness and admire your expressive pen's beautiful way with words. Your last line is an elegant finale to a deep and resonate piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/8/2021 8:43:00 PM

Thank you Susan! In all honesty, what started out as an intent to write an etheree, ended up as a nonet :)