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I dream of a day when there is total blending. Like sombiant in host. the self extension that is self. Total penetration in each other. The discussion of eyes, the echo of embrace. My time wants in your love, like brook surrounds stone like breeze shivers tree.

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Date: 6/26/2010 2:16:00 PM
I like the theory of oneness in this poem. The integration of time and love is so wonderful. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/26/2010 1:48:00 AM
" The discussion of eyes, the echo of embrace." Great stuff right there. I feel your words. I"ll try to note to check out more of your stuff. Thanks for taking the time to write something with some passion.- Fish.
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:17:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rosalie. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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