One-Legged Sparrow

One drop fell down, one followed more
Then my count failed, free downpour
From two cloudy eyes, tears wishes feet
My lone miseries, life's endless beat.

On my bay, a sweet sparrow sat
Flown from far, but resting at last
In his beak a thread, thin long
Kept his weight down, started a song.

Weary of singing, he looked over wings
In such small frame, life joyfully blinks
Then I spot his one-legged walk
How shameful my moans, how so dark!

Oh God, tiny wings evinced glee
In his woes, but a king in flee.


Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S CHOICE F,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
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Makama Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Poor sparrow but still an inpiration. Great work friend.
Somadas Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Funom..Yes, a simple life inspiring us..
Wolf Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:11 PM
You've given a poor, lame sparrow into a regal persona! Bravo, Jenish! :) gw
Somadas Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 11:06 PM
Your delightful words made my day..Takecare Gershon..
Pandit Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 8:28 AM
We don't see the pain of others--a potent message, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Hawkins Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 3:09 AM
Even though he is very small with only one leg he is still able to sing and fly to great heights. It makes me ashamed of myself for moaning too. Lovely Poem Jenish ...
Somadas Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Thank you Shirley..Your poetic comments are such a support for my muse..Takecare..
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