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One With It All

Lying on a bed of grass blades. Constellations are my blanket. Breathing in the darkest shades. Listening to the cricket’s melody. The sweet caress of the flowers. Their scent coating my body, To be washed away by the showers, The cloud band poured down. Swaying with the Whipping Willow tree, With each burst of wind set loose. Soaring with the birds; so high and free. A giant world through the ant's eye. Skipping across the variegation pond. The fish nipping at my fingertips. Whispering secrets of the fond, Mother Nature and her gifts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/15/2016 11:10:00 PM
Toshia,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Toshia Hall
Date: 6/16/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/16/2016 11:52:00 PM
You are one of the best writer...and you are being missed here...come back !!! We need to read and write loads and loads of poems...Hope u remember me ? Do you remember the funny poem we wrote. togather....hahahaha
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Toshia Hall
Date: 5/17/2016 7:01:00 AM
Hi!!!!! I miss reading your writings also. I'll be checking in, I promise. :) I could never forget you or the hilarious poem we wrote!
Date: 7/28/2013 11:42:00 PM
Oh I love this! Such WONDERFUL imagery. This is a beautiful piece of work!
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Date: 7/12/2013 2:29:00 PM
YES! WOO HOO! This is a clear example of one's 3rd eye in full clarity and a strong embrace of life's simple pleasures! This piece made me smile! Wonderful!
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Toshia Hall
Date: 7/12/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Drake. I'm happy you enjoyed it! :)

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