One Way Love

"Last Christmas I gave you my heart" a heart so thirsty for your aqua nest, a nest I thought was just for me and waited for a nod so many days. "Used to think that life was sweet" as sweet as your beautiful face, a face that soon would smile at me but in your nest was somebody else. "If he brings you happiness" "no, I'll never get the blues" I am yet to take back my heart still it is entwined with yours. "No New Years day to celebrate" for celebration means you to me, if you someday give back my heart along with it,give your heart free. Song#1:George Michael(Last Christmas I Gave You My Heart) Song#2:Cliff Richard(Used To Think That Life Was Sweet) Song#3:Freddy Fender(If He Brings You Happiness) Song#4:Cliff Richard (Lucky Lips) Song#5:Stevie Wonder(No New Years Day To Celebrate) © 2011 kashinath karmakar (15th May 2011) ================================

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Date: 10/24/2011 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "sing a song for me" contest Kasdh. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congrats Kash on a fabulous win with great song choices for this cool contest my friend..luv..
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Date: 10/15/2011 11:54:00 AM
Some very familiar songs, Kash. Smooth lines of love. Congrats on this melodic win.
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:38:00 AM
great Transition one to four songsters lines emotions pour well done mate Don
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:15:00 AM
Love the way you put these songs together, Kash
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:46:00 AM
thankxx Kash ..so glad u enjoyed Prissy Pair as I had three sets of in-laws altogether in my life but now all gone to rest.. appreciate the well wishes for the contest my friend... extending the same to u for this beauty ..luv..
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Date: 5/17/2011 8:11:00 AM
Beautiful work....Thanks for supporting some of my work as well.Have a wonderful Day.Never stop the poetry.......Kacey
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:51:00 PM
HI,again, wating for a new poem!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:33:00 AM
This is a beautiful collection.......
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:01:00 AM
Kash, you did a fabulous job weaving these song lyrics together to make an outstanding poem. Great use of rhyme as well. Wishing you success in Chris Matt's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:57:00 AM
Excellent creation...emotion flows uninterruptedly...stay in touch plz
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:45:00 AM
Hi Kashinath, I think it's pretty cool how you related yours to holidays, starting with Christmas and ending with New Year. Also a sad write but you made this flow flow with the lyrics you chose, wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 5/16/2011 9:25:00 AM
Oh, so you know quite many songs, kashinath. I totally draw blank on the theme.Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:56:00 AM
Perfect selection of songs and artists Kash to enhance your lines of luv in this piece .. luv all u have chosen my friend.. good luck in the contest with this dynamic entry luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:13:00 AM
oh, I like how you mixed in songs with Christmas theme. I LOVE that Freddy Fender song you chose and the STevie Wonder song too. Those choices belie your age, my sweet friend! heehee. Hope this one does well in the contest!! (can you remind me the title of the Cliff Richard song?)
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:01:00 AM
Love the last lines the most-Now, tell me this is true? I can't figure out how you guys are comin up with these awesome entries about lyrics. It boggles my mind! U will rock in this contest, lady. Nicely done! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2011 11:36:00 PM
* “I Love Being Able To Step Into Another Words * To Feel Their Voice As If They Were Reciting Its Moment Unto Myself Dear Kashinath * And This Love Expressed Causes One To But Hope * Your Precious Heart Shall Find Its Hand * Love * Holding Tightly Your Own * Till The Ends of Endless Time * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/15/2011 9:31:00 PM
a merry, happy piece you have here... i was singing along, kashi... best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:20:00 PM
These four songs are my all time favourites.And if somebody is yet to listen these songs,I request him/her to listen these just once.
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