One Way Love

"Last Christmas I gave you my heart" a heart so thirsty for your aqua nest, a nest I thought was just for me and waited for a nod so many days. "Used to think that life was sweet" as sweet as your beautiful face, a face that soon would smile at me but in your nest was somebody else. "If he brings you happiness" "no, I'll never get the blues" I am yet to take back my heart still it is entwined with yours. "No New Years day to celebrate" for celebration means you to me, if you someday give back my heart along with it,give your heart free. Song#1:George Michael(Last Christmas I Gave You My Heart) Song#2:Cliff Richard(Used To Think That Life Was Sweet) Song#3:Freddy Fender(If He Brings You Happiness) Song#4:Cliff Richard (Lucky Lips) Song#5:Stevie Wonder(No New Years Day To Celebrate) © 2011 kashinath karmakar (15th May 2011) ================================
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Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "sing a song for me" contest Kasdh. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Congrats Kash on a fabulous win with great song choices for this cool contest my friend..luv..
Song Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Some very familiar songs, Kash. Smooth lines of love. Congrats on this melodic win.
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:38 AM
great Transition one to four songsters lines emotions pour well done mate Don
Horne Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Love the way you put these songs together, Kash
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 4:46 AM
thankxx Kash ..so glad u enjoyed Prissy Pair as I had three sets of in-laws altogether in my life but now all gone to rest.. appreciate the well wishes for the contest my friend... extending the same to u for this beauty ..luv..
Greenlee Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Beautiful work....Thanks for supporting some of my work as well.Have a wonderful Day.Never stop the poetry.......Kacey
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 9:51 PM
HI,again, wating for a new poem!!
Sundara Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:33 AM
This is a beautiful collection.......
Devonshire Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:01 AM
Kash, you did a fabulous job weaving these song lyrics together to make an outstanding poem. Great use of rhyme as well. Wishing you success in Chris Matt's contest! Love, Carolyn
Dey Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Excellent creation...emotion flows uninterruptedly...stay in touch plz
K. Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Hi Kashinath, I think it's pretty cool how you related yours to holidays, starting with Christmas and ending with New Year. Also a sad write but you made this flow flow with the lyrics you chose, wish you the best in the contest :)
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Oh, so you know quite many songs, kashinath. I totally draw blank on the theme.Good luck in the contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Perfect selection of songs and artists Kash to enhance your lines of luv in this piece .. luv all u have chosen my friend.. good luck in the contest with this dynamic entry luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 12:13 AM
oh, I like how you mixed in songs with Christmas theme. I LOVE that Freddy Fender song you chose and the STevie Wonder song too. Those choices belie your age, my sweet friend! heehee. Hope this one does well in the contest!! (can you remind me the title of the Cliff Richard song?)
Song Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 12:01 AM
Love the last lines the most-Now, tell me this is true? I can't figure out how you guys are comin up with these awesome entries about lyrics. It boggles my mind! U will rock in this contest, lady. Nicely done! Gwendolen
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May 15, 2011 at 11:36 PM
* “I Love Being Able To Step Into Another Words * To Feel Their Voice As If They Were Reciting Its Moment Unto Myself Dear Kashinath * And This Love Expressed Causes One To But Hope * Your Precious Heart Shall Find Its Hand * Love * Holding Tightly Your Own * Till The Ends of Endless Time * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 9:31 PM
a merry, happy piece you have here... i was singing along, kashi... best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:20 PM
These four songs are my all time favourites.And if somebody is yet to listen these songs,I request him/her to listen these just once.
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