One, Two

One, two
I texted you.

Three, four
I wanted more.

Five, six 
saw your tricks.

Seven, eight 
It was too late.

Nine, ten
Now it's broken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 7, 2026 at 9:02 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : [email protected]
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May 21, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Holley Estep, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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January 25, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup if you need any help just ask. Light & Love
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