One Too Many

Ohhhh, they brought me flowers 
That is so very sweet
But why are they laying them 
Right down by my feet? 

What's going on 
I really don't know 
Last thing I remember
I was driving real slow 

I saw a bright light 
It was flashing red 
But I couldn't focus
It just hurt my head 

I must have made it though 
I really don't know 
Too many drinks 
I had somewhere to go 

So I got in my car 
Tried to drive home 
I was feeling tired 
And so very alone 

Just wanted to lay down 
Take a little nap 
The next thing I know 
There's glass in my lap 

I could hear a squeal 
Sounds of metal crashing 
Pain in my body 
Forever lasting 

But now I'm awake 
My loved ones are here 
Yeah that's all it was 
Just a silly nightmare 

Need to say thanks for the flowers
But I can't turn my head 
Oh my god, I can't move 
I think I'm dead 

Yes, the flowers are wreaths 
And in this coffin I lie 
I drove drunk last night 
I guess I did die 

My family is crying 
I didn't mean to make them sad 
One less than the legal limit 
Is all that I had 

But one too many holds new meaning for me
As family and friends say a tearful goodbye
I am left all alone  
And in this coffin I lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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