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One Summer Day

I want to muse—
without 
wearing eye-glasses, but 
urge my pen for words that guide 
to sea of love. Sun makes 

her lips fiery, we sip 
the day, 
swallow it, childishly! Hmm, Nitz’s heart 
pumps out breath, holding our souls 

like victims for ransom. Ah, 
etching our aliases in the sudor like wine 
on the lustful spread of green, I 

look for the cheerful shadow 
of sky, as we dress our minds 

with chrysanthemum of a summer day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/26/2011 9:49:00 PM
congrats on having two poems make it thru round one of the competition. this one is beautiful.
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X 2 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Ernesto. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Ernesto on your poem "One Summer Day" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Ernesto. Love, Carol
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