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One Summer Day

I want to muse— without wearing eye-glasses, but urge my pen for words that guide to sea of love. Sun makes her lips fiery, we sip the day, swallow it, childishly! Hmm, Nitz’s heart pumps out breath, holding our souls like victims for ransom. Ah, etching our aliases in the sudor like wine on the lustful spread of green, I look for the cheerful shadow of sky, as we dress our minds with chrysanthemum of a summer day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/26/2011 9:49:00 PM
congrats on having two poems make it thru round one of the competition. this one is beautiful.
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X 2 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Ernesto. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Ernesto on your poem "One Summer Day" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Ernesto. Love, Carol
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