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One Strike

One strike ~~~~~~~~ A woman I used to love made a statement once She said; "Lover when god made you he broke the mold" Those were the days of ego now long past gone But you can bet that earned her loving like wildfire The man child’s form that of a modern Adonis Stands naked for her as she surveys the tools That creates pleasure for her enjoyment Such a forbidden and carnal delight Not a happy ending for these true lovers Of a not too distant past, she had to be replaced Sadly enough for she forgot one thing His heart wasn’t made of stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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