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One Souper's Simple Rhyme

Many people have kindly said
my writings must be read.	

Most can tell from the very start
that my renderings are directly from the heart.

They say I write of beauty and love
as if my hands were kissed by a dove.

They say my soulful song is one you must hear
knowing it will often cause one to shed a tear.

Some have asked why not take the time
to put your words in meter and Rhyme.

I say the stirring echoes of my rambling expression
often stands naked in the face of poetic compression.

Dear Soupers I not only thank you all for reading my poems,
but for giving my once solitary voice the very best of all homes.




Soupers this one was right off the top of my head which is very unlike me.  


Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2014 4:52:00 PM
Hello, Kim, how nice it is to see you on line. Today I decided to return to the soup, I hope you will return too, with a new post. I do love how you enjoyed this one from right off the top of your head... Can you do another one..... Looking forward.... always your Fan... Linda
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Date: 3/8/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Kim, immediately I stopped by your blog. Please call me Linda..... Sending friendly smiles.... xox~ Linda
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Kim Morrison
Date: 3/8/2014 2:15:00 PM
Hi Destroyer: I just wrote a blog "I will be back" that explains where I have been and what I have been doing. As said in my blog, I am working on a few... always your fan too...Kim
Date: 10/10/2013 5:30:00 PM
Hello Kim, it was nice seeing you stop by my latest today. I hope your college classes have been going well... :) :).. better yet, I'm hoping you stop by when you have time to post another poem... miss seeing you around... xox~ LINDA
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Kim Morrison
Date: 10/10/2013 7:06:00 PM
I failed algebra in the summer, so I had to retake it this fall that is why I have not been writing much. I am doing little better with it this go around.I miss being being around. Thank You Kim!
Date: 6/22/2013 5:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, for my placement in the story telling contest!! Such an honor to be among those amazing true stories!! Thank you!!
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/22/2013 6:11:00 PM
You are welcome! Loved your story!
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/22/2013 6:10:00 PM
Your Welcome! Loved your story!
Date: 6/17/2013 8:59:00 AM
Good morning Kim, and here you find me reading your poem once again. A lovely solitary voice with in yourself. I am glad and happy to know you have found a place to express your writings, always looking forward enjoying your words and poems.... always~ Linda
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/19/2013 3:06:00 AM
Thank You PD! Kim
Date: 6/10/2013 11:34:00 PM
I really dig that one, you are awesome!!!!
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/11/2013 4:54:00 AM
Thank You! Kim
Date: 6/5/2013 4:43:00 AM
- Yes, I enjoy reading your poem Kim! - You are very talented! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:55:00 AM
Thank You as always Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/4/2013 4:56:00 PM
i like this poem Kim. always~ Linda
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/4/2013 5:04:00 PM
Thank You! Linda
Date: 6/3/2013 1:45:00 PM
And well done as well. I find myself going more for free verse these days than rhyme...I'm stuck on it now. Enjoyed your contest!
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/3/2013 5:58:00 PM
Thank You for submitting your poem it was a very interesting read. Well folks up here were beginning to wonder if I could do a rhyme. I can do this and I can write in meter, but I prefer not to do either. Rhymes are too often sing song sounding to my ear and meter, in my opinion, is creatively constipating to me. thank You Kim
Date: 6/3/2013 3:42:00 AM
Sometimes our best poems come right off the top of our heads and this is a good example of that Kim...I also want to thank you for placing my poem in your free verse contest - Tim
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/3/2013 6:35:00 AM
You welcome! Thanks for the comment!
Date: 6/1/2013 2:32:00 PM
A very endearing and SUPER way to express the sweet heartfelt appreciation for others who find solace in writing and in comforting words of encouragement. Thank you :
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 6:44:00 PM
Thank You very much for your fantastic comment Kim!
Date: 6/1/2013 1:54:00 PM
I'm with everyone else, nicely done, my friend. and I'm happy you found our haven here at Soup.
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 2:11:00 PM
Thank You Andrea! I always love your comments. Kim
Date: 6/1/2013 11:39:00 AM
fantastic job.sometimes some of our best are right off the top of your head.Thank you for the recent place in your free verse.take care
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 11:47:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 6/1/2013 10:58:00 AM
Very nice.....:-)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 11:27:00 AM
thank you! kim
Date: 6/1/2013 10:53:00 AM
Nicely done, great rhyming. Rick
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 11:27:00 AM
thank you Rick!
Date: 6/1/2013 9:19:00 AM
excellent Kim flows well and full of heart felt passion great pen Shadow
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Kim Morrison
Date: 6/1/2013 9:47:00 AM
thank You! This is one of my rare quick writes. Kim