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One Sided Love Affair

Loving someone when they don't love you back is a uniquely painful thing Pouring your heart out to an empty void leaves a most terrible sting And a one sided love affair when I love you and you don't care it brings me down into despair and I'm sure you have better things to do than to bother with my love for you There's no one there when I look in the mirror it's as if I can see through your eyes 'Cause when you look at me you're not seeing me either but I guess that it's really no surprise and I know one day I'll be wise but until then I'll tell myself lies This old heart is out of whack like an echo that won't come back a locomotive that slipped off the track and I'm quite sure you've better things to do than to tell me that you love me too And I guess that'll just have to do

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Date: 1/17/2019 4:19:00 PM
Very touching Michael. I liked the rhythm of it too. For some reason it made me feel lonely...
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Date: 1/17/2019 4:22:00 PM
Probably because I felt lonely when I wrote it. I had someone in mind while writing. I'm glad you felt a little of what I was trying to convey, and I hope that isn't taken the wrong way. As artists and writers, that's what we hope, what we strive for, to share what we're feeling, and hope someone understands. Your comment shows that you obviously do. Thanks Susan. :)

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