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One Sided Love

I really have this urge to tell you something it probably isn't anything too deep and though I sit and reminisce about our love life this question in my brain won't let me sleep Do you think you love me or don't you? Have you even thought about our situation? You excuse my doubts with undue concern 'cause they only tend to cause you complications. I gotta bring myself to one realization that you may not even like me anymore and when I finally tell you what I am about to any love you had for me will wander far I still adore you love, though I can't find it but somehow I still know that it's right here. So please don't show your irritation for me when I beg for your attention through my tears I guess I could go on writing forever but you have your life to live and I have mine I just wanted to stop and tell you 'thank you' for the love I thought was both of ours through time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/20/2017 6:55:00 PM
This is a beautiful sadness, truly well done.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Robert
Date: 3/20/2017 9:29:00 AM
Your words are well chosen and convey a meaning that flows smoothly into the next line of thought, and speak in a inquisitive voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Emile.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for reading, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 8:27:00 AM
Bitter sweet is romance Gayle - Nicely expressed.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2017 3:18:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 3/20/2017 6:49:00 AM
This is very sad my friend. When one feels or has feelings for another whether friendship or love and it is not returned or has turned to indifference........hurts beyond measure. Well written Gayle.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2017 3:18:00 PM
Yes, I'm afraid it's a sad reminder for those of us who've lived it :(
Date: 3/20/2017 3:29:00 AM
A bleak situation when love is one sided Gayle. #7
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2017 3:16:00 PM
ugghhh! Tell me about it! ;p

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