One Plus One Haiga

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hiku images frozen into epigrams- tripping off a brush | Year Posted 2010

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/24/2021 7:32:00 PM

"images tripping off a brush" Such a creative thought. You certainly have a way with words. :) Brandy

Brian Strand
Date: 9/25/2021 12:48:00 AM

Yes Brandy,semantics have always interested me..wordplay especially

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/24/2021 7:31:00 PM

Oh I do like this, Brian! such creative movement in line 3 twist is art rarely seen here!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/25/2021 12:47:00 AM

Indeed Jim,its a cultural Japanese artform so difficult to assimilate for us

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2021 10:01:00 AM

Great imagery, Brian!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/25/2021 12:46:00 AM

Yes Kim I like form though its not cultural to our English language hobby

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2021 4:04:00 AM

I like this one. Enjoyed the educational part. Your visits to my page are uplifting. I added a comment to my work you visited this morning that might fill you in. Sara

Brian Strand
Date: 9/25/2021 12:44:00 AM

Sara,I've done a few haiga,but it is culturally more suited to its origins where both the arts together are more than the individual parts